不忠于情

嘿嘿，终于有进展了........
不过呢，在明争暗斗还有使阴谋方面，我还得加把劲。
毕竟要使高手段，还是件难事。
要写得好更加难........
有时真的会想是不是不适合写小说。
但有时还真不想对不起那些灵感，所以才决定要写下的。
毕竟是个心愿啊！
我这人好几次要做某件事都做不成，只希望这次可以坚持到底。
谢谢你啊，仪琳，一直帮我审文还有听我的故事结构。
还有老哥，多亏你替我想了名字，要不，很多东西都毁了。

不过呀，我老想的，都是后半部的故事情节，前半部的......
好像荒废了。
唉.......惨了，不过，武瞾和赵澈的故事比较有趣。
女主角方面，水嫣和狐星梦会比较吸引。
赵悬和龙玥的，比较闷。

是否该改一改，把后半部的变作前面，
前半部的变作回忆便好？
哎呀，好乱，明明先想好前半部的，
怎么后来的注意力全被后半部吸去了。
气死人了，改天找仪琳商量看好了。

第一部的故事如果不发展，第二步就很难写了，
因为很多事会变得不清楚。
怎么办...........
救命啊！

瓶颈

认识我的人都该知道，我神神秘秘的在写一些东西。
不错，我是在写小说，
故事结构好了，人物初步定了。
刚开始挺好，没什么事，有一阵，还灵感超标。
那时竟是考试时期.......
哎.......
天不顺人。

可是最近，我遇到瓶颈了。
唉.......
恐怖，有时竟然是握着笔，
愣了一整天，一个字都吐不出来。
人物，标了这个人是容易，可是，
塑造个性，需要非常大的时间去揣摩。
马马虎虎写了，个性不生动，一切就毁了。

还有故事，情节构思，好难。
要符合逻辑，又不可一太普通或匪夷所思，
最难是取舍吧......
有些情节自己构思了很喜欢，但对不上其他情节，
作者在这时候就要勇于取舍。
要不然硬把一个情节塞进去，很怪。

说的好像大作家似的，其实我还不是一个菜鸟。
第一篇长篇小说不会好到哪里去，
但毕竟是我个人的一个心愿，
希望有生之年得以达成。

读书商道

好久没来写了，最近比较忙，
考试一塌糊涂，前途路渐行渐难。
不过，却点起了我有史以来，最想翻身的火苗。
我不甘心，
我是有点懒，但是，我也有努力的。
却考歪了。
哎，怨谁呢？只有自己了。

我时常看小说，离不开电视，这个啊，
的确得收敛。
跟爸爸聊了，他知道我数学挂了，却没骂我，
反而鼓励我，真的，很感激。

我这次失败了，败在太懒散，太轻敌。
中六，的确不是想象中的容易。
算了，就当作了宗赔本生意，下次再赚回来就好了。

老哥骂的是啊！
付出的代价，是大了点。
但是，我终于敢于面对。
我会加油的，不会在胡思乱想，
虽然依然离不开电视，但我会减少，
也会改一改怕输的心态。

手中有钱，心中无钱，
不知道，我能不能将此道理融入读书之道呢？
如果真能做到，
那我才真能盈利双收呢。

大家对我有信心，我自己却不敢说，
但我会尽我所能，努力吧！

Dino

This holiday, I went to Kuala Lumpur with my siblings.

Well, we are lucky to have relatives there so there's no need to worry about the matter of hospitality.
As usual, we stayed in our Uncle Yew Wei's house.

I like his house because it is really artistic, most of the things is DIY and you feel really free in his house as you can do or use whatever you want.

Just don't spoilt anything.

Feel like home, is my uncle's propaganda to his niece and nephews.

But what that makes me like his house so much is his son, i mean his pet.

Ya, you are right, it's dino from the title, a fluffy white sphinx.

He is our little cousin.

Although old in dog age, (14 years old)

he is as adorerable as a puppy , and everyone agree this.

But he wont brings a ball and ask you to play, he don't want to play tug of war,

he is not as destructive as marley nor as talented for shows as lasie.

He is just a quiet dog which loves apollo cake.

One morning i accidentally ate his apollo cake and unfortunately he saw it and i got scold by his dog language.

To comfort him

I had to let him eat.

My brother looks after whenever he goes to my uncle house, and you can see the dog talks and tells him somethings.

wonders he knows what dino says.

Dino likes my sister, he likes to goes to her and sat by her feet where she would pat him nicely and the dog doze off.

My cousin(human), Ee Ling, I wonder did she upset Dino before.

Err, Dino, doesn't like her that much.

He may growls when eeling touch him which shocks her much.

But now it's better.

Maybe eeling accidentally ate his apollo cake without apolozising to him.

Dino has a brother, Oldi which left him behind last year.

He realised his brother's left a few days after and cry hysterically.

Who ever had said animal's don't have feelings?

Human may trapped and even killed their own siblings for some unknown reasons,

but dogs may sometimes fight but still cry over the death of their beloved.]

maybe in some case, animals are respectful than humans.

In this world , human not only kill the other species but also their own kind.

It's sad to hear this, right?

Dino, you are my uncle greatest support and what keep him happy the most.

You will let us know when the time comes , right?

You are the greatest dog ever!

报恩

哎呀，终于假期了，可是，假期前夕，

我们算术老师竟为我们捎了个坏消息，

九月中旬大考，气死我也！

原本归心似箭的心，突然如冷水浇头，冷了、愣了。

中三考试，关我何事？为何定得因其提前，而跟着提前呢？

可有天理？我们也可以压后的啊！

为何定得提前？

哎..........事与愿违。

中六的生活一日比一日的忙，功课一日比一日多。

所幸，至今本人尚可应付，功课往往更不能随我归家。

朋友们，其实若你们有何疑问，本人是愿闻其详，加以回答

只是，我有时会心情不太好（尤其睡眠不足，血糖低时），

所以反应较为冷漠，抱歉了。

而且本人也并非韩愈等辈，不善教学，往往弄巧反拙。

可惜你们亦不会明白我，多半会认为此人自私冷漠........

但所庆幸乃，亦有明白我之人，使我得以释怀。

往日故友，在下实在思念你们。

往日你们的苦，现在得以深感其受。

并非你们不愿教，只是你们偶尔也想做自己的事情。

智隽，明哲，毓康，谢谢也对不起！

老彦啊，此生最好的朋友或不是你，但此生最感激之人，却非你莫属。

打扰你太多，欠你太多，我十分抱歉。

老姐曾说，我就只会对朋友好，

但她从未看过我的友人是如何赴汤蹈火的帮助我。

洁仪如此，千寻如此，佩婷如此，老彦亦是如此。

此等人，我为其办事，亦是义不容辞，决不皱一下眉头。

也许，大家会说我傻，何必因为别人对你的一日好，就对别人加倍的好。

我也难保自己能一直这样下去，也许有一天我会比赢政更忘恩负义，谁知道呀？

这一刻，乘我仍有哪一点情谊，我会尽我所能，报答你们。

我的一半，使得报父母家人，另一半分给你们吧！

留一些些给自己就好了。

不知是么时候才能还清，但我会努力的。

你们也有欠我哦！哈哈，互相还清吧！

武侠

我钟爱武侠小说，这是认识我的人都知道的事，
虽然我姐姐老说人过了一个年纪就不想再看武侠小说了，然而，
我觉得，不然。

小生年方十八，依然钟爱此类小说，说我不成熟？
是随尊便。
为什么一个十八岁的人捧着一本韩式爱情无厘头小说，
倒没人说幼稚了？
罢了，我不想和谁争辩，毕竟与我同好者不多。

一本好看的武侠小说，除了故事情节之外，
我想人物是最重要的，
不但是主人翁，其余的配角的角色必须是灵活，生动，
角色分配得捉得很准确，不能太多也不能太少，
绝不能有喧宾夺主之相。
故事情节，无论在武打或情感方面，火候也要控制得很好，
哪一方面太投入，或太疏忽，也不行，
小说，必须令读者直接想象到其画面，描写仔细得来，却不能太修饰。

难写吧？武侠小说的确比起一般小说来说，费时更多。
人物多，故事复杂，
或许有些不喜欢看武侠小说，为的就是这个。
我记得曾经有一个朋友说，武侠小说太多人物了，
看了这一个又忘了刚才这个是谁了。
嗯，无法否认，有些人不能接受武侠小说，
那没什么，我本人也有不能接受的书籍。

我看过最喜欢的武侠小说，
应该是凤歌的昆仑吧！
老哥曾问我昆仑还是沧海好些？
呵呵，至今我依然不太答得出来。
若选的话，昆仑吧！毕竟是第一本令我在武侠新秀中惊艳的作品。

主角成长写得非常和顺，没有所谓突然的转变，
武打情节虽没金庸好，却有自己一番风味。
值得一看。

沧海也是一部值得看的小说，
同作者的手法，角色分配很生动性更卓越。
新的武打手法，融合了一些玄幻因素，
其中纸风蝶，千鳞，写得不错。
令人印象深刻。

现在有许多玄幻式的武侠小说，
其中诛仙（介绍过了），搜神记，不错，
只是前者武打方式有待改进，后者故事过于冗长。

总之，都是我的意见，值得参考！

Anime

I enjoy watching anime,

err....I had to mention that it's japan anime.

However my request is quite high, haha

maybe get an influence from my brother.

Most people may think that anime, nah......

parents:" Time wasting! Please, get your attention on your schoolwork!"

Teacher:"Bring bad influence to youngsters these days........ahh, I wonder what they are thinking?"

Students(a part, mostly study type):" anime? you mean cartoon? oh god, please, how old are you? It's better to read a book or watch discovery"

That's how some people react when they heard the term anime,why?

Actually,most people watch japan anime because of the fine drawing of handsome bishonen(花样男）and kawayi girls that is really hard to find in reality.

They don't care what the anime brings and what it tends to say.

They just often discuss like this:" Did you see that Kaname? oh , he is truly handsome."

"nah......I think Zero is better......."

Nobody will says like this:''I think the plot of XXX is meaningful , the quality of the anime is good."

Who cares? they just want to see handsome guys and cute girls.

For me, it's different,some of the anime really shows up some important values of life when their plot progress on.

I have watch a couple of anime that is meaningful and brings out the good and bad that happens in real life.

For example, Code Geass, as I rated it the best anime I have ever watched,

with the rebellion of the hero , Lelouch, the story shows that the great impact that war brings to human, the desire of human in gaining happiness.

This guy of Britiania had start his rebellion towards the Great Kingdom of Britainia with the reason to change the world for the sake of his sister, without realising himself is to express his hatred towards his father who abondoned while he is young.

The second hero, Suzaku,through his own story shows the struggle of a man between his own people and his duty as a Britainia Knight.

Knowing to be hate by the japanese,Suzaku choose to serve the Kingdom that ruins his homeland and keep his beliefs that he kill to end war forever.

The heroin, C.C, an immortal girl that desires death, also brings out the characteristic that most people have that is lonely and desire to be love.

Another anime that i reccommend is Gundam 00 that just hits its end in early of this year.

The theme of this mobile suite action anime is politics ( which may bored somebody)

The main character Setsuna.F.Seiei was once a child soldier in middle east and he joined a organisation named Celestial Being in the name to end conflicts on earth.

Through the 4 meisters brings out the effort of human to end war and the dark side of nation politics.

oth the hero(Setsuna) and heroin, Marina, shows different stand to gain peace,

one insist on fight to change, another choose to gain peace in soft methods.

As the plot goes on, it shows how an human could be change by war and how people get blinded by powership.

I admit that some don't agree with me, however, I should say that some anime, with good producers, good plot, good characters is worth to watch than any love and soap dramas and operas.

It's better to watch something that makes you rethink and learn about our life than crying over your handkerchief for the love story that you can apply nothing in real time.

Above is my personal oppinion, any disagreement,

nah......mind your own buisness.